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Proud Beauty

Stark and Majestic it stands, wearing a corona of clouds, that flows from behind and expands, giving you the feeling it's proud, of its crags and rugged beauty, that it spied, reflected, in the sea.
For the contest; Another Nature Verse Sponsored by John Freeman Placement: 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/5/2011 11:11:00 AM
Imaginative and poetic...I like it.
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Date: 10/3/2011 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 4:42:00 PM
Paula, the feeling it gives is proud, Thanks dear one for your patronage to my contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:40:00 AM
My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Paula
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:50:00 AM
Great write. Congratulations Paula
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:22:00 AM
Congrats Paula on another great win with these lovely lines my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:43:00 PM
This is such a wonderful write depicting the picture given! Very descriptive and full of rich imagery! I love your poem!! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:14:00 PM
Paula, I love your clear description. Just lovely. I think line one has a typo. Luv , Andrea ps. I admired your taking a stand in the blogs!
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Paula Swanson
Date: 9/24/2011 12:11:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up and your support.
Date: 9/23/2011 9:10:00 PM
excuse me, i found your "T" playing out in the parking lot. i see "s" has too it's place in the first line. you should make them take their proper places. john
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Paula Swanson
Date: 9/24/2011 12:12:00 AM
They have now been sent to their proper places. Thanks!

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