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Promises of Fluff

Lightly stepping on Fluffy clouds of promises my eyes wide open in a sky of certain lies no fluff left to break my fall Restlessly sleeping on fluffy pillows of trust eyes closed naively in a bed of broken dreams no fluff left to protect me By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, January 31, 2012 For Fluff contest First Place finish in Carol Brown's Fluff Contest

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Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/10/2012 12:46:00 PM

A wonderfully "fluffy" write. Congrats on your win in Carol's contest.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/10/2012 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Samuel! Have a blessed weekend, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 12:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/10/2012 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Carol for the wonderful opportunity and the placement. These contests are so much fun. I love the opportunity to write about new things. Keep them coming! Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams

Date: 2/10/2012 1:56:00 AM

Rhonda congrats on your win, broken dreams prevent sleep no matter how good the pillow..David

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/10/2012 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, David! Congrats to you on your cute and extremely funny winner!! Blessings, Rhonda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/10/2012 1:33:00 AM

Congratualtions Rhonda ,xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/10/2012 4:10:00 PM

Thank you, Mandy! Congrats to you, too!! Your Fluff poem is hilarious. Thanks for the laugh. Blessings, Rhonda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/9/2012 5:41:00 PM

Congrats, Rhonda. Outstanding write. Nice going. luv Ralph

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/9/2012 5:58:00 PM

Thanks again Ralph! I loved your funny play on Puff the Magic Dragon. Congrats to you, too! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/9/2012 4:59:00 PM

congrats Rhonda on a magnificent first place win for this awesome writer on fluff.. if u need to adjust your entry for my contest u can do so.. I also posted an Etheree example for the contest so u can check that out .. thankxx for support luv..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/9/2012 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Linda-Marie! I always appreciate your kind words...I think my entry is alright just a different approach. We will see...thanks so much for the opportunity to be a part of an amazing writing environment. Blwssings, Rhonda

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/9/2012 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Rhonda, love Elzabeth

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/9/2012 4:27:00 PM

Thanks, Elizabeth and congrats to you, too!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/31/2012 8:37:00 PM

delicately woven lines Rhonda with splendid images .. good luck in contest luv..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/31/2012 9:00:00 PM

Thanks, Linda-Marie! This one was cathartic. Blessings, Rhonda

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 1/31/2012 7:56:00 PM

Wow Rhonda-This is really great. I loved the play on words-very cool!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/31/2012 8:17:00 PM

Thanks, Natalie!! I have to admit I've been lied to quite a bit lately by a loved one. I have to distance myself from this person and get the feelings out. I feel a little better after writing this! Blessings, Rhonda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/31/2012 6:23:00 PM

LIke it...! Good luck. BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/31/2012 7:51:00 PM

Thanks, Barbara!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 4:09:00 PM

Thank you for your support of my contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/31/2012 7:54:00 PM

Thanks for the opportunity!! I added to my entry. It's now a tanka duo! Blessings, Rhonda