Promises

Please don’t say “I promise” - This is to people everywhere, Because as soon as we say the word, we break it then and there.

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2015 8:18:00 AM

Hi Sneha...managed to locate a poem of yours which I had not read before! Just a couplet, but it makes a lot of sense. Too many promises are broken, but luckily, to be fair, there are also those that are not. ~ All the best. // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 6:48:00 AM

incredibly straight forward and on point. Great piece

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2014 12:46:00 AM

Coming here to say I hope you had a great xmas day!! Can't stay up too late and don't see new posts of yours. Luv, andrea

Sneha Rv
Date: 12/26/2014 12:53:00 AM

Thank you! Hope you did too! I will sure post something new soon!

Archana Garg

Date: 12/25/2014 10:47:00 PM

well said !!!

Sneha Rv
Date: 12/26/2014 12:53:00 AM

Thanks! c:

Tim Smith

Date: 12/25/2014 8:06:00 AM

There is an old saying that comes to mind "promises are made to be broken"...I think the word "promise" is overused and has lost it's true meaning....Happy Holidays to you and your family.....hugs Tim

Sneha Rv
Date: 12/25/2014 9:41:00 AM

Thanks so much! A very merry Christmas to you too!

Daniel Human

Date: 12/24/2014 10:34:00 PM

Good point. I promise I won't. :) d.

Sneha Rv
Date: 12/26/2014 12:52:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2014 11:59:00 AM

hmmm, I really like this, but there are exceptions to everything , dearie. think of all those who promised to stick by their mates til death do them part. That number is not as great today as many years ago, but it still exists!

Sneha Rv
Date: 12/26/2014 12:52:00 AM

Oh yes! Thank you!