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Promises

Thank you for the promises You gave me hope to cling to... To carry with me all my life I've kept them in my backpack I've seen them written in the sky I've seen them in the sunrise I've seen them in my children's eyes... Thank you for the promises I've felt them soothe my spirit Like the sunshine gently warms the grain Like the moon shines over sleeping hills And the dawn brings sound of needed rain And now I sit here upon the steps that I have always known I recall that endless summer eve that went beyond the river's calm.... A promise made, that you would be always here,....right next to me And now that I have grown,.... I look, but I can't see you,.... But, I can feel you in the wind .................. _____________________________________________________ Francine's Contest: Gordon Lightfoot's Song: "Thank You For The Promises"

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Date: 5/6/2012 10:58:00 AM
thanks for entering Carrie and congrats on your seventh place win
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Lightfoot" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie and on all your wins!!! well done my friend!!! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/2/2012 6:29:00 AM
This is a terrific write... and I miss you... JackReed3
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Date: 5/1/2012 4:27:00 PM
Smile ~ "Hi Baby, This Is Beautiful & You Are Beautiful &, 'I Love You, Forever;'" John!:) ~
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Date: 5/1/2012 2:12:00 PM
Carrie superb good luck..David
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Date: 5/1/2012 1:48:00 PM
Good work....good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/1/2012 1:35:00 PM
A wonderful poem Carrie it is a pleasure to read it. This one must be a win poem in the contest, wish you good luck!!! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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