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Promised Tides

On a lonely pier of weathered wood and salt water etchings, beneath a moonlit mosaic on a cloudless sky Stained glass brush strokes cling to a northern horizon as I cast my heart afloat, wishing on a promised tide that it reaches you

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Date: 11/18/2016 2:22:00 PM
I'm floating within your charmed sentiments. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am happy you liked my little poem.
Date: 11/18/2016 8:26:00 AM
Lovely !!!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine.
Date: 11/17/2016 9:11:00 PM
Beautiful...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim.
Date: 11/17/2016 7:57:00 PM
Hi Chris, I love reading your poetic lines. Because they transport me to another place. This is so romantic and the imagery is amazing. I hope she reads this write and see how much she is loved."Stained glass brush strokes cling to a northern horizon as I cast my heart afloat," Are words that can just make a girls heart melt. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. Your kindness is always appreciated.
Date: 11/17/2016 7:28:00 PM
This is so nice. You write such beautiful poems. I love stained glass. It makes me think of the stained glass windows in my house (some with designs of angels). :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2016 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, I always appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems.

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