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Promise To Love Me

You saw me there in the night A ghost come back to haunt the light The blood flowed from my veins Into the street and down the gutter You held me and closed my eyes And settled me down until my last breath Had left my body, my soul took flight You promised to love me and said it was alright Though we were strangers you showed compassion And so I have come back to visit your love For I know no other love in this world You give me hope in the darkness That I might see the light And know that I’m alright Ghostly passion is my might Something more than candle light Dripping upon the floor I love you for now and evermore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/11/2013 8:28:00 PM
Stephen, i like the imagery... this is such a sweet write... good looking end... thanks for reading a few of my latest poem... xox....Linda
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Date: 9/7/2013 1:44:00 AM
The past is a ghost that remains in our minds, whether we love it or not. I enjoyed reading this enchanting poem. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/7/2013 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Laura. Always good to hear from you. Your comments mean a lot to me. ~Kilmer~
Date: 9/2/2013 11:59:00 AM
The height of passion and love, beautifully written and very romantic.
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Date: 9/1/2013 4:36:00 PM
Touching. Touche.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/1/2013 4:39:00 PM
And the rattling of sabers begins I suppose...? ;) Thanks Alozar for the read and the comment.~Kilmer
Date: 9/1/2013 10:23:00 AM
WOW.. This sears right through the veins to the soul. I am completely riveted by this expression of love and graciousness :)
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 9/1/2013 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Karen, every now and again I get romantic. Tough for an old bird like me! ;) Glad you liked it. Kilmer
Date: 8/31/2013 7:57:00 PM
Wonderful flow of love's sentiments
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/31/2013 8:28:00 PM
Dr. Mehta, I thank you again for your comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and comment. Many thanks, ~ Kilmer

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