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Promise of Love

Jubilation of my triumph, comfort soothing sorrow, Aspirations of my passions, today and tomorrow, Reveling reveries-elysian that love brought to fore; You are the gift I adore, smiling through my yore, As tenor of forever-love reverberates in your sphere When extolling you, dear, heartbeats-ardent cheer. My dear, when I am with you, how fervid souls coo, Lauding promise of love, mirthful impulses renew, For you are my musings, my esoteric zealous dream, My sensuous sassy dawn, hosting romantic theme, Unfolding treasured albums endearing vibes reveal, My precious gem of life, sparkling amorous appeal. Rhythms of my heart, how within your heart attune, While rejoicing gift of love endearing spirits croon Vowing pledges eternal, reaffirming bonds anew, Conferring in lyrics of love, streaming just for you, For you are my melody, strumming love’s encore~ My verse and sweet chorus: I love you ever more. April 9, 2023 Placed 10th: I Only Live To Love You Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/8/2023 8:39:00 AM

A captivating verse, abounding in loveliness and romantic charm. Wonderful, Vijay. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 4/14/2023 2:17:00 PM

Beautiful love poem, Vijay. It really flowed well. I liked the sprinkling of alliteration throughout. Have a great week! Bill

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/13/2023 8:33:00 PM

"My verse and sweet chorus: I love you ever more" -Love-filled passionate poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/13/2023 6:37:00 PM

Outstanding Vijay, I have no idea how I overlooked this. Added to my faves. The joy and love shown in this poem are palpable. The music is gentle, ethereal, and lovely. The beauty is staggering. To the winner go the accolades.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/11/2023 5:49:00 AM

Amazing! Beautifully written. This poem brings so much happiness with love. Outstanding Vijay. A definite Fave for me. I enjoyed this today :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2023 1:04:00 PM

Always a pleasure when you visit my friend. Many thanks for your supportive comments and your FAVE, Heidi. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 4/10/2023 5:43:00 PM

You had me at mesmerizing, my friend. WOW WOW… My sensuous sassy dawn, that is just a breathtaking line. This whole piece is a masterpiece. So beautiful! A winner and a fave for me.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2023 12:54:00 PM

So very kind of you my friend. So special to read your feedback and receive your FAVE, Fin. Many thanks.

Valsa George

Date: 4/10/2023 9:42:00 AM

Melodious musings on love in choicest words.... making the heart beat in rapid rhythm! You are at your best in chanting love songs ! Win great, dear friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2023 12:53:00 PM

So nice to hear that. Much appreciate your kind feedback, my friend. Many thanks, Valsa.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/10/2023 8:51:00 AM

"Rhythms of my heart, how within your heart attune, While rejoicing gift of love endearing spirits croon Vowing pledges eternal," -- such wonderful declarations of love immortal. Beautiful writing!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2023 12:52:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always. Many thanks, Joe.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/10/2023 5:16:00 AM

Rhythms of my heart, how within your heart attune, I hear the music of you and it sounds heavenly to the ear, winning wishes Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2023 6:26:00 AM

Heavenly to the ear--so special to read your compliments, Vienna. Your remarks more eloquent than the poem. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/10/2023 4:50:00 AM

Romantic to the core, Vijay, beautiful:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2023 6:24:00 AM

Much appreciate your complimentary feedback, Jo. Many thanks for your visit and your comments.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/10/2023 4:04:00 AM

You write romantic verse so well Vijay, best of luck in the contest. Have a great week ahead. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2023 6:24:00 AM

So nice to hear that Tom. Thanks for being there for everyone. Much appreciate, as always.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/9/2023 8:35:00 PM

A lovely poem Viijay. Beautifully written. Soft and tender. I love it

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2023 6:23:00 AM

Thank you Wendy. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/9/2023 5:21:00 PM

"My precious gem of life, sparkling amorous appeal." Such a beautiful thought. This is soft, dreamy and romantic, all at the same time. Simply breathtaking, Vijay. Good luck in the contest. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2023 6:23:00 AM

So nice to hear that my friend. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate your support--many thanks, Brandy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 7:48:00 AM

- Love described in beautiful lines, Vijay - A wonderful poem that promises true love :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2023 6:21:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Anne-Lise. Many thanks, as always.