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I promise to be faithful, and hope that you do too. I promise to be honest, so please tell me the truth. I promise I will listen, so don't hold nothing back; you cheated on that other girl, but don't do me like that. I won't ask you for money, so don't tell me you're broke; I promise not to fuss you out, If i did so I would choke. I promise not to make a promise that I cannot keep, I promise to be everything that you need me to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/7/2021 6:21:00 PM
So good, so long ago...
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Date: 12/24/2009 3:36:00 AM
Have you watched the movie "Up"? If not, do so. I don't know if this is a topic or real life but I find that past behavior predicts future behavior. I noticed the second stanza for it really stood out to me. I hope that you take notice of it also. Love the poem and the way that it is put together. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 12/14/2009 3:28:00 PM
As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Amanda. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol
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