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Oh crap they taste bad like old spit I cleaned them with pumice and grit With extra effort they don’t fit Maybe they are bent too How about your’s, are they perfect? Check twice, imperfect I suspect Let me know if there’s a defect If broken I have glue Your’s also failed? Best put them down This predicament makes me frown I’ll meet you later near downtown Bring dentures, mine for you

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Date: 9/1/2023 8:00:00 AM
very funny, congratulations.
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest, James! A creative take on the contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/30/2023 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Funny but not funny. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:20:00 AM
"Bring dentures, mine for you" - Interesting writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2023 5:11:00 AM
I got a kick out of this one, James. "Love the ending." Done well, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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