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Proactive Fight We Must Win

Gray skies loom over the dark mountains all around. Strong wind blows old leaves rolling across the street. Branches are thrown about on the dry tan grass. The branch is gone, once it breaks to fall on bare ground. Single clouds spout bursts of tears even with blue skies. The leaves still hanging tremble like someone with fear. It makes me think of the current upheaval, riots and broken glass. I ask you why is this what you want? I pass an old worn gray picnic table, empty today. I think we just need to sit for a moment to think about this. We must not deny it, but face it. We must not give up, but believe. We can be united to plant a tree growing with unity. We can be so much more than this, if only we stop to see. People are hurting, dying, revenge is never the way to peace. Tearing apart what our country stands for destroys it from within. We are so much better than this. It is a proactive fight we must win. Heidi Sands

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Date: 11/11/2016 3:47:00 PM
Hi Heidi Thank you for commenting on my poem. I was just thinking Donald Trump has just been elected and the fist thing he did was offer up a Consilatary tone saying he wanted to unite and bring all together and the so called peace loving liberal opposition are on the streets Rioting. Who is dividing us or are we just dividing ourselves. Nice Poem , Cheers Chris
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2017 8:34:00 AM
Hi Chris. I was going through some old poems of mine and found this comment from you that I didn't see before and wanted to thank you for your comment :)
Date: 11/11/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you for writing this Heidi. I am getting more disgusted by the minute by what I am seeing happening in our country. I'd settle for some of these people just acting human...that would definitely be a start. Your poem speaks to me loudly.
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Date: 11/11/2016 1:26:00 PM
You are welcome. I agree, this is out of control. This is not what our country is about, turning to anarchy. Thank you for visiting Chris.

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