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Prim and Proper

Let's see if I can be prim and proper Been a while on this teeter totter Can't help myself Inside, naughty dwells Very strong, suck it up like a blotter © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/18/2015 6:10:00 PM

Ahhh... Have a touch of Captain Jack Sparrow in you... Don't Ya! Bet you brought it back with you from Florida! LOL... Did you go to the Keyes?... They sound so facinating!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 6:17:00 PM

Been to the Keyes but not this time! Stayed in a fabulous house in Bradenton with a bird cage pool area out back with sun and temps in the 80s every day... stunning! xxxxxxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/17/2015 10:48:00 PM

Hope all is well Jack! Another silly Limerick from the happy-go-lucky poet we all love, and know it! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 5:41:00 AM

All is well as long as I see "Laura Breidenthal" in my in-box!!! I love you, sweet Laura! xxxxxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/17/2015 8:04:00 PM

I bloody well agree with Lindsay! Welcome back Jack! Much as we enjoyed the limericks of the duo, we missed you. Good evening! :-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 5:38:00 AM

Happy to hear those two guys filled in for me! Had a fantastic time in the Florida sun... now I'm back with all you Souper guys... could life be any better??? A big resounding NO!!! Love ya Kimmie! xxxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/17/2015 6:37:00 PM

Oh how the week has been black/I've pined for the poet young Jack/and now this morning/without any warning/he's back; he's back... he's bloody well back!!! Hooray - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 5:35:00 AM

WOWSER! The limerick craze us alive and well! Thanks for the great welcome back, my Aussie friend!!!