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Priest

The darkness of peoples faces, As I flow through the cloud of people, And ashes. Dark metal machines express depression, Black clouds cover the sky, Making the sun shy, Never leave the city, Or go against the gods. There is evil in the dust, The wasteland of death and sorrow, Creatures reside in the wasteland, Never seeing, Never seeing light. They hear with their stomachs, They feed off your fears. I, the priest, will conquer, Their appetite for blood. The vampire menace is here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:17:00 PM
Joseph,, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/7/2013 4:42:00 PM
I like the reality of this fictional universe...well done :)
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Date: 8/23/2013 9:51:00 PM
wow! Joseph, love the epic poem. Reminds of a movie called priest. Thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/23/2013 1:26:00 PM
Love it ! being a fan of True Blood , I am yet to write a vampire poem , and this was great ! keep writing . Yvette
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Date: 8/23/2013 2:23:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Joseph ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:48:00 PM
Hello Joseph, lol, love the menace and dark approach, Hope you toast them all by day. Your first poem on the soup is excellent and fun for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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