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narwhal herd

When sea gods invisibly show their glory They’re escorted by their elusive sea army; Vow before them, their loud rhapsodic chords play, As heard in light of blue waves on summer day. Marvelous army with mighty spiral swords Hewed by sea gods, their magnificence- behold! Their trimmed trident’s tines conjure like somersault, Wish I'm sea god’s knight to ride on them and joust. Coastal birds herald their rare presence with glee With ineffable joy, breeze hums sweet ditty; Surfs break in applause beneath the granite cliffs As splendid narwhals’ display… nature breaths…sniffs~ Narwhals are great sea god’s mighty unicorns, They’re special sea army, prides of Poseidon!

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/21/2016 11:52:00 AM

What an incredible sonnet! You should be one of the reasons a world sonnet day should exist. Beautiful! So beautiful

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/4/2015 8:55:00 PM

My friend, sorry I miss finding this great poem until now! And congrats on it be POTD! A WELL DESERVED HONOR..A7

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2015 10:33:00 PM

It's alright my very dear friend, Robert. I've missed a lot more here at PS already and I've missed a lot of your great and wonderful writes. I should be the one to say sorry. But I'll try my very best to drop by this weekend, ok. Thanks a lot for passing by and your warm congratulatory comments. So much appreciated. Many hugs from me to you and your wife.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/30/2015 2:42:00 PM

Hello Leonora, Still checking out your poetry here. Belated congratulations are in order here for "POTD"!! This is truly a special write indeed. I've done my share of sonnets too, but I must say this is the first time I've read one in a 11-syllable versification. Quite unique and quite wonderful. The high quality tone and tenor rendered by this type of meter helps to highlight further the fine imagery and perfect word diction of your sonnet. Another "7" + "FAV" in my book!! Best Always, Gary

Len Gasun
Date: 11/3/2015 8:21:00 AM

Hello, my dear friend, Gary. This is just a try to 11 syllables sonnet instead of ten, a little revision made. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your precious time to read my sonnet. Your encouraging words mean a lot to me. Thank you for the honor o faving my poem and the 7 rating. God bless you .Hugs! Hugs!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/29/2015 7:48:00 AM

Hi Leonora. Congrats for your WIN in this well mastered piece! ;-)

Len Gasun
Date: 10/30/2015 11:56:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Teddy. Hugs back to you!

James Inman

Date: 10/28/2015 11:46:00 AM

Beautifully written. I'm sorry I missed it as POTD.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/30/2015 11:50:00 AM

It's ok my dear friend, James. Thank you so much! Many hugs!

Skat A

Date: 10/28/2015 1:32:00 AM

Hello Leonora, Congratulations on your Awesome Narwhal WIN. I'm inviting you on over to my Narwhal Party. AT -- http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=29146&PoetID=17922 -- Don't be a party pooper, bring a smile or two. :-) Forever ~SKAT~

Len Gasun
Date: 10/30/2015 8:08:00 AM

Thank you so much also for honoring me through your loving invitation. I'm on my way there my dearest sis and friend...

Len Gasun
Date: 10/30/2015 8:06:00 AM

Oh, thank you, thank you sooo much my dearest sis and friend, Skat! Many hugs to you with my loving kisses too. I appreciate so much my win and especially for your approval on my poem in your contest. It means a lot to me. I will go to your blog my dearest friend and join the party bringing with me all my sweetest smiles:))). Hugs and kisses! More power and God bless!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2015 12:33:00 AM

Leonora, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Len Gasun
Date: 10/30/2015 7:42:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Alexis. Many hugs to you!

Sneha Rv

Date: 10/6/2015 11:07:00 AM

This is sooo lovely, dear Leonora!! I loved the title too!! Is this for the Narwhal Contest? :D :D

Len Gasun
Date: 10/30/2015 7:23:00 AM

Oh, my dear friend Sneha, I am very sorry and I apologize sincerely for just reading this now. I've missed it and so late to reply. Please forgive me, please.. Yes,this was for the contest and thank you soooo much for the beautiful and inspiring feedback. Many hugs to you from me.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/4/2015 3:53:00 PM

Beautiful pen Leonora! Excellent Sonnet in subject and style my very dear friend! I really enjoyed it.A 7! And I want to wish you today a very Happy Birthday to You!:) I really hope that you're celebrating it very big with family and friends and that you're having lots of love, fun, and presents, Lenora:)Sending you love and hugs!I wish you all the happiness in the world, and all the best always!Take good care now!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you always!:) D

Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2015 8:26:00 AM

Again, thank you so much and wishing you as well a very lovely day and God bless you, too my very dear friend! May hugs!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for your precious time reading my very dear friend, Dorian for your very encouraging,/inspiring comment and the 7. Also your loving greetings on my birthday. For now, I'm not celebrating my birthday. I will celebrate it on Wednesday where I'm more free and my mom might get better from her cough, hopefully:)). Again, thank you thank you so much and many hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2015 9:49:00 PM

this is going to ride waves, SiS.... I love the amazing poem from you.You did well on the imagery. God's mighty sea Unicorns... I love these creatures... Love and Hugs... forever your BFF... LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 10/1/2015 11:56:00 PM

So much thanks for loving this experimental poem of mine my dearest sis and your very inspiring words and comments. I'm glad you like it and I know unicorns are your favourite. I will dedicate this poem of mine also to you! Love you my forever sis and BFF! TYTYTYSSSM though words aren't enough to express my gratitude and joy of your loving visit. Happy Happy Birthday! One of my gifts to you with the other October Poems! love you lots, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2015 3:31:00 PM

this is such a lovely representation of this animal calling it Prides of Poseidon. I enjoyed your imagery. Yes, dear, let me know right away when you get engaged!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/30/2015 10:01:00 AM

Sure my very dear friend, Andrea. Thank you so much again. Hugs!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/27/2015 6:18:00 PM

Oh..awesome imagery. I can see why this was the POTD yesterday. Congrats, Leo! So sorry for my late greeting. hugs!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 9:35:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Kim. No problem my dear friend, coz I am always late as well and I'm so guilty all the time:)). Yesterday, I supposed to come back here but after school, I invited my mom to go shopping and went home very late at night coz of the rain. Thank you once again and sending hugs to you my dear friend.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/27/2015 10:29:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear poet friends for your congratulatory comments (for garnering as POTD) and sharing generously your precious time reading my poem and letting me know it's featured as POTD. This is my first time that my poem is POTD and I'm happy. This is a big approval and encouragement for me. TYTYSM. I'll be back later to visit you, I promise. Warm Hugs back at you all! love lots, Leonora

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/27/2015 9:56:00 AM

Very cool poem, Indeed! Thank you, Leonora! jimbo

Len Gasun
Date: 9/27/2015 11:50:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend! Hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/26/2015 6:42:00 PM

I am delighted to see this wonderful poem as POTD Leonora! I already told you how much I love it! Congratulations dear friend.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/27/2015 11:54:00 AM

Thank you so much for loving it my very dear friend, Connie.and also for your warm congratulatory comments. It's such an honor for me to fave/love it by one of the great poets here. In fact, this is also my first time i think to be featured as POTD and I'm so happy and grateful. This is such a great approval on my work. Again, tytyssm! Many hugs to u from me!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2015 6:33:00 PM

beautiful descriptive write good luck in the contest and congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 10:41:00 AM

thank you my dear friend, Jan. Hugs to you!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2015 6:06:00 PM

Hi Leonora! How lovely to see you in action again! Your pride of Poseidon brings pride to this delightful write. Very enjoyable. ~ Also congratulations on POTD. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. hugs // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Paul. But how I wish I have more time on the soup. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for your congratulatory comments and your lovely visit. I did have a great wkend with the mercy of God, despite health snag of my dearest mom my dear friend. Hope you did have lovely wkend too and lovely weekdays ahead! God bless!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2015 2:29:00 PM

- Back to congratulate you, dear friend Leonora !!! - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much once again my dear friend of mine, Anne! Best wishes to you as well! God bless! Many hugs!

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/26/2015 11:02:00 AM

COngrats on P.O.T.D

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 11:33:00 AM

Thank you my dear Miraj. I'm so grateful for your visit and lovely comments on my humble poem. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. Hugs!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2015 10:01:00 AM

Wonderful descriptive write a 7 and a winner..Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Leonora!!!!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/29/2015 1:13:00 PM

Oh, thank you for the lovely comments, inspiring rating and your warm congrats my very dear friend, Eve! Hugs back at you. I'll be back soon to read from you ok cuz it's already dawn here and I've work tom. I'll come back, promise. Good night and sending you my hugs and kisses!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/26/2015 8:50:00 AM

Beautiful and so well-written, a poem reflecting talent ... CayCay

Len Gasun
Date: 9/30/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for your encouraging words my dear friend, Caycay! Hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/26/2015 6:40:00 AM

Excellent choice for POTD.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/30/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Richard! Hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/25/2015 6:52:00 PM

Well my dear friend, this beautiful poem has a place in my heart and in my favorites file. It brought me joy! 7

Len Gasun
Date: 9/27/2015 12:00:00 PM

Oh, I'm so touched by your very kind gesture of appreciation my very dear friend, Connie. It's been an honor for me as well. I'm so happy that I brought you joy my very dear friend! Thank you soooo much for the 7 and for you tremendous encouragement and support.

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/25/2015 5:01:00 PM

This was very good, I never even knew what narwhal was until this contest honestly, your write is so..mythical and wonderful

Len Gasun
Date: 9/30/2015 10:26:00 AM

Thank you my very dear friend, Cas. I didn't know as well. I'm so grateful and happy to learn about them from our dearest friend Skat. I didn't know that there are amazing sea creatures as these so out of curiosity, I googled them. Thank you thank you sooo much my dear friend! Hugs!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/25/2015 1:35:00 PM

Exciting sonnet Leonora. You took me on an adventure.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/30/2015 10:16:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my very dear friend, Tim! I'm glad to know that I took you on an adventure in this humble poem of mine. God bless! Hugs!