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Pride and Predators

Even predators have mothers and with the soft mewling eyes of infancy they search, search for the breast of mother the beak, the tooth, the talon, the claw… Children worldwide hunger. The small weak voices and stone dead eyes calling out to those who have… Mothers making stone soup. Mothers giving of their own body the last remnants of harsh life as the haves go on safari’s or to zoos to feed the animals.

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Date: 9/15/2011 9:12:00 AM
nice!
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Date: 9/8/2011 2:37:00 AM
"voices and stone dead eyes calling out to those who have ... " great image and sound, Debbie. Indeed, they make soup from stones to allow others to count money. The poem is a pain.
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Date: 8/7/2011 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Very creative work..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2011 9:23:00 AM
Many congrats on your big win, Debbie
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! --Lori
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Date: 8/4/2011 7:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Thanks for bringing to the contest a verse honoring the hungry in your write. Pray that justice will prevail. Love, Glenna
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:25:00 PM
Debbie, Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:47:00 AM
well don little babe hon, your doing well up there:)
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:57:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your stellar win with this stunning poetry luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:53:00 PM
nice one, debs..cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:34:00 PM
Very touching! You know how to take on sad subjects in a mature tone. An excellent piece. Have a great day,Debbie
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:37:00 PM
I see by the writes which I've read tonight of yours dear poet, that you are taking a brave step, with desire, to help the little souls who are suffering, and I do applaude you for this ! And a poet can do much through writes such as yours Debbie. Again, a sad write, yet a bold step reaching out on behalf of the suffering children. TY for this write, and the inspiration to help the children ! I pray others collect together and lend a helping hand ! Good night Debbie...much love, james
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:25:00 PM
so true ,beautiful write, lovely poetry
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:25:00 PM
A very good summing up here Debbie..
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:07:00 PM
is it part of the truth or is part of deception? 7up i love this you crossed the fence to get a taste of what it feels like to be that guy
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:06:00 PM
tragic isn't it? These reminders are much needed because of our short attention spans etc. a seeing write
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:04:00 PM
terrific write so very true and sad...with love...old Jack
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