Prickly Love

impaled am I want as pierced as need… thorns of your soul

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2014 9:45:00 PM

Quite a tragic image!! gosh, what contest was this for? I am seeing it got a win. WEll, Congrats to you!

David Mohn
Date: 10/17/2014 7:38:00 AM

Hi Andrea - this was for judy Konos "The Lazy Contest" where you could submit anything you wanted so I gave this one a shot - thanks for the comment and have a wonderful weekend :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/16/2014 8:38:00 AM

Another hit David,congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2014 5:34:00 AM

Wonderfully penned, david, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2014 4:43:00 AM

many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 10/15/2014 11:37:00 PM

No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/15/2014 5:05:00 AM

Yes...very much to ponder on in this write. You got me at the title! :) But what is a rose without thorns? It does not exist. Thanks for your visit to my work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2014 12:46:00 PM

Interesting unique work..Love can pierce sometimes..Thanks for the visits to my work and my blog..I appreciate the encouraging words..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 2:39:00 PM

So deep and dark:-) hugs jan xxx