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Prey On the Moment

There is a moment that stalks my solitude the one where my soul breaks from your absence, it lurks with the confidence of apocalyptic attitude, from my fortitude a firecry of absolute need attacks resistance revealing your fingerprints upon my heart, patterns in somatic multitude making lust an onslaught of obsession, soul ignition, kiss cognition, partner permanence, there will be no heart barter, no angle of defense, just you and me in beautiful exactitude, I discover you everyday, the omnipresence of your love's mainstay warm on the ******** of my morning, leading me into creation, I find your poetry in freedom's pain, where love and life play and when pity drums a cold doubt I see your brave grin, as the battles end with quiet fatigue you stay strong and sweet, a promise pure within, when night softens the body I lay you take me to bliss again - J.A.B.

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Date: 8/30/2015 12:52:00 AM
beautiful......
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/30/2015 2:25:00 AM
She makes love beautiful Eileen...J.A.B.
Date: 5/18/2015 5:57:00 AM
Very nice Justin.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/20/2015 8:32:00 PM
Love is very nice Lucy, especially when it blooms...J.A.B.
Date: 4/30/2015 9:43:00 PM
Justin, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautifully penned write and thanks for visiting my poem, at the gallery. . .
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/3/2015 8:22:00 PM
You have the style of a sharp diamond my wise Poetess...J.A.B.
Date: 4/27/2015 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations Justin (: You're the best! Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/28/2015 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful Laura, I congratulate you for your loving attitude. You battle true, the songs of triumph do indeed know you...J.A.B.
Date: 4/27/2015 8:47:00 PM
Justin, the reason I rarely comment on your poems though I've read them since I joined is the overwhelming sense of inadequacy, the thought that my words wouldn't be enough to do justice to the work of art in front of me. So I go away silently. Call it cowardice, I call it shyness. So I just enjoy your works and let others speak for me. One thing I will say, reading your words has never left me feeling dirty, rather they validate the innate feeling. Thank you and congrats on your POTD!Kim :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/28/2015 3:10:00 AM
Its okay to be shy with your beauty, to be silent in your star heat, and you are never dirty in the truthful touch of your desire Kim...you earned your victory, you won with love...J.A.B.
Date: 4/27/2015 4:30:00 PM
So happy to see this wonderful poem selected as POTD Justin. Big congrats!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/28/2015 2:55:00 AM
Thank you Connie, I am happy that this love is living proud with such honors...J.A.B.
Date: 4/27/2015 3:27:00 AM
Justin, beautifully penned with many wondrous words and lines like fingerprints upon my heart, I love that, a perfect 7 from me and I want to thank you so much for the Honorable Mention in your What Is Your Hypocrisy Contest, I am very honored
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/28/2015 2:49:00 AM
Your poetry always pulses with genuine feeling about what it is to be a woman who won't surrender to grief, you teach us about what the honest heart must know to be heroic Broken Wings...you are a Poetess with wings of fire. The hands of love always leave a mark...J.A.B.
Date: 4/25/2015 12:36:00 AM
"it lurks with the confidence of apocalyptic attitude" ..a most intense moment you speak of... I love all these lines..."kiss cognition"... I really like that, and the line "I discover you everyday, the omnipresence of your love's mainstay....warm on the erection of my morning, leading me into creation". And the last three lines are so full of affection and gentleness.. you begin so very intense and end in sweet bliss. It's magic, Justin. Amazing job..Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/25/2015 3:57:00 PM
You always please me with your eyes of sensual analysis Laura...the awakening of a heart into a love that can heal is very intense. The movement of emotions, desires and affection is the spirit of this moment, the balance of these hearts Laura...J.A.B.
Date: 4/25/2015 12:21:00 AM
I'd love to hear your voice behind these words, because the rhythm and rhyme to it flows so very nicely. You've definitely got a style that is all your own. As I said in a comment reply, I am in love with this composition...your expressions heighten each love sensation. You describe this need, this lust, so eloquently. And your title "Prey On The Moment" is so perfect. Sometimes moments prey on us instead,; through the reassurance of love we face each battle so we may have more moments of bliss
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/25/2015 3:15:00 PM
To be in love with this compostion is to be in love with Chance...yes my Gothic Princess, the title speaks of moments that challenge the foundations of our existence, moments that ask no permission, they are confrontational in the most beautiful of ways. My voice is a moving temptation of love Laura...J.A.B.

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