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Pretty Little Lace

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Pretty Little Lace

wrapped tight; 
the softest shackles 
Braided like arms .
weaving us together ,

How tight will you tie,
how much can I take?
Before the ribbon breaks,
pretty little lace

splitting all over the floor 
I want to be free 
you pretty little ribbon 
they can have that face

My laughter carries on the wind
I have my release 
constricting little ribbon 
 In pieces, reckless abandon 

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:51:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Melani! A great write indeed! Thank you so much also for sharing! Have a great day/ weekend! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Hello Melani, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Just the right amount of restraint! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:45:00 PM
    a wonderful poem, Melanie. An honor to share second place with you. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Wow! I love those questions! : ) Excellent write, Melani! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Melani, the images and metaphor here are amazing and erotic and it flows so well---hmm Freudian slip there!