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Pretty Flower On a Lonesome Walk

In the twilight of a Summer day In a barren place far, far away I came upon a yellow flower among the rocks and scree Through great strain she pushed through the stones ..and in this blight she made a home She made me smile as I looked down and she looked up at me A thing of beauty so misplaced No palace garden or jeweled case Just me and her out in the wastes, what is, but shouldn’t be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/26/2014 4:55:00 AM
simply stunning:-) I love the imagery here Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:44:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Yore. Welcome to the Soup. I hope you enjoy it here.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/25/2014 9:45:00 PM
Sorry Yort my auto correct doesn't know how to spell sometimes.
Date: 9/25/2014 9:09:00 PM
Welcome to ps.What a sweet and lovely poem!!Charma
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:01:00 PM
Way Cool, I wish I knew what those little yellow flowers are that are sprinkle like salt on the earth breaking providing some spice and color! Like the poem :)
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