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Pretty and Pert Sightseeing

Out sightseeing in an old town one day Casually strolling passing many shops and sites I suddenly passed a bar window And what I saw gave me a thrill and I saw a great site For there perched on a stool pretty and pert Was the most gorgeous girl With a very short skirt That rode high Giving me a lovely view of her stocking tops Long legs and lovely thigh She was talking to a guy I casually walked back and forth Past the window around half a dozen times Just to make sure they were alright Had a great day that day and saw a few sites That stuck in my mind when I got home that night But I could have kicked myself you see Just my luck to see one lucky guy I wished was me. Peter Dome.Copyright.2015 May.

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/27/2015 7:24:00 AM

I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!

Peter Dome
Date: 5/28/2015 12:04:00 PM

Hi Funom. so good to hear from you with you're kind words. I look forward to reading you'r poems soon. I'm thrilled you enjoy mine. Thank you so much. my very best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2015 8:43:00 AM

- A great poem .............. wishes and dreams ...... something must be done, Peter !!!! - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome
Date: 5/24/2015 11:41:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise. so good to hear from you. just felt I was missing out on the finer things in life. thank you so much. take good care. best wishes. Pete,

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/24/2015 3:48:00 AM

Hmmn...you started with a humor in the story but ended up with a bit of wistful plea... :-) Very good, Peter. A 7.

Peter Dome
Date: 5/24/2015 5:29:00 AM

Yes. but that's how I felt. it's not so much what I saw, it was more to do with the fact that I'm a lonely guy. please don't think that's all I see in a women it isn't infarct it's the last thing. I rather have a strong friendship and romance. Thank you. my best wishes. Pete.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/24/2015 2:07:00 AM

Interesting as always, I enjoy reading our poem...lol...well penned Dome......Afolabi.

Peter Dome
Date: 5/24/2015 3:35:00 AM

Thank you Afolabi. I really appreciate your kind words. glad you enjoy my work, Take good care. best wishes. Pete.

Skat A

Date: 5/24/2015 12:05:00 AM

Peter, that was deep. Enjoyed:) Thank you for sharing your poem. Goodnight **SKAT**

Peter Dome
Date: 5/24/2015 5:32:00 AM

Yes thank you Skat. it wasn't so much what I saw. just seeing the couple togheer enjoying each others company made me feel being single. that I was missing out. not having a relationship. thank you. take care. Pete.