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Pretentious Friend

YEAH just walk away, Rene I don’t need you anyway to know if this was meant for YOU you'll question in your mind. I always thought that you were cool until you made me out the fool you clenched the doubt when you sold out Pretending to be kind Was I just blind or too naïve to see what you had up your sleeve? You never once allowed yourself a genuine friendship So yeah, just walk away Rene I’ll never ruin another day you proved yourself, "pretentious friend" when you gave me the slip.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/22/2018 9:27:00 AM

But they can be so interesting to watch. You said your piece well.

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/8/2018 4:42:00 PM

Well dang! Tell her Gayle! I like the bite on this one ;)

Gayle Rodd
Date: 4/9/2018 8:57:00 AM

lol thx! Me too ;)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 2/21/2018 10:30:00 PM

Hello. You are the winner, she's one not able to enjoy your personality and friendship. Her loss!!! You might enjoy my poem, "Saddened,"relates to those that choose to leave us for no reason. bbn

Gayle Rodd
Date: 2/22/2018 10:45:00 AM

Ooh thank you and I'll go check it out now...

Neil Kruger

Date: 9/19/2017 3:41:00 PM

friends come and go but loved once are forever

Aqua Marine

Date: 9/6/2017 5:18:00 PM

Hi Gayle, real friends are hard to find, and keep.. You are a helper, a giver- and you deserve better! Just keep going...you have a Big Heart, protect it well....(((Hugs)))