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Pretend, how about it, a different life, one of more accord and much less strife, of calmer days and soothing winds, quivering leaves on swaying limbs, light blue skies with puffy clouds, no shouting people in riotous crowds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/4/2014 3:49:00 PM
I'm glad I came across this one - so much said in a few powerful words! Deep and beautiful with great imagery. Makes me feel like getting away "far from the madding crowd!"
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Jim Tidd
Date: 12/4/2014 3:51:00 PM
I was reading it over, and I thought to myself, "How did I write this?" :)
Date: 8/21/2014 7:27:00 AM
what a wonderful vision.
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