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Pressure

Pressure all around us governing nature low means a good chance of violent storms. Gales blowing the waves into enormous crests that rush smashing at cliff and the beach. High signifies good weather and sunshine that warms our heart cockles with smiles. Bringing life to our lovely landscape coating all in a rainbow of gorgeous colour. In between all can be calm, but take your brolly least you get drenched in a sudden down pour. One minute sweating pulling off layers of clothing the next you are shivering and reaching for a sweater. Yet it is this very pressure that makes our world the most beautiful one known in our universe. From space we show up as a blue world of water if in a plane mainly a green place with patches. Vibrant bands of yellow, reds, purples and violets fill in the patchwork quilts. If we ever lost pressure our world would completely change maybe even becoming barren. So I say long, long live pressure even when low.

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Date: 9/2/2017 2:59:00 PM
You explain it very very well with your imagery, Shadow! Brilliant!
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:41:00 AM
what fizz is plopped by poems ... hmm ... nice word workn ...
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Date: 8/28/2017 8:37:00 AM
Very informative and a different perspective on pressure, Shadow:) hope you are much better now:)
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Date: 8/25/2017 6:30:00 PM
I sure hope you get well, prayers for you... I love this write, Shadow.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/10/2017 7:39:00 AM
Hope, now you are going fine High Low or Medium. Right you are. Nature is controlling. We are balancing. Love n Best Wishes
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:23:00 PM
Nice metaphors beyond the meterology :) I am sorry to hear you were ill, I hope the test results bring good news.
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Date: 8/6/2017 3:03:00 PM
There will always be highs and lows to keep the balance in our earth. The yin and the yang. It is when we upset this balance that our earth suffers which will eventually lead to our suffering. We have a very beautiful planet and we should all strive to take care of it. Your poem wonderfully expresses that beauty Shadow! I hope you are feeling much better! : )
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:52:00 AM
Both nice and informative. Low? Bad. High? Good. Did I get that right? Shadow, I love this kind of stuff.
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Date: 8/5/2017 5:54:00 PM
Great piece...get well soon ,great poet...
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Date: 8/5/2017 9:22:00 AM
Hope all the pressures are gone, my friend...nicely penned...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/28/2017 2:11:00 PM
Beautifully crafted and stated my friend! I have missed your lovely creations when I was away Shadow! You have delighted me with this remarkable piece here, and have honored the Earth with its ability to keep pressures going! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Russell Sivey
Date: 7/28/2017 2:11:00 PM
PS Please get better soon!
Date: 7/28/2017 1:12:00 PM
This is a great poem. I love how you put this together. I hope you are feeling better soon :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 12:51:00 PM
This is a magnificent meteorological write! Having worked outdoors for two decades this I do especially appreciate :) xomo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/28/2017 1:38:00 PM
And get well soon too!

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