Presence

PRESENCE This cat of mine A presence This particular cat Others some have it People too but lack the simplicity The Sphinx comes to mind Ages trail back of those eyes Egyptian prized Flashing eyes from the recesses some primordial cave Totality of sensation cannot be described No It is a feeling old as creation A softness inside “Big Bang!” Its energy fills all space With those ultra-microscopic specks (clearly invisible) Which ultimately must come back together

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2012 11:00:00 PM

Yes, the one I saw earlier today. One of your very reflective pieces, my friend. you have a great imaginative mind.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/9/2012 10:15:00 AM

Ages trail back of those eyes....lack the simplicity.......ultimately must come back together.........wow......incredible lines! Daver!.....leave it to a "first-chair" musician to accomplish leaps of creativity such as this beauty!!!!to mine favs!.......jimbo

James Peranteau

Date: 2/9/2012 7:02:00 AM

I see where my knowledge begins and ends with this here write dear poet, and I thank you for adding to it ! Great write Dave ! Have a wonderful day sir....much love, james