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Prelude To Light

Vindictive and vicious is the night as grim and gruesome shadows shroud the light, an opaque cloud darkens the moon as frightened creatures scurry at awful and annoying howls finding cover int the bushes, or behind a monolith in a a museum of the unseen the heavens are fortunate now As a prelude to the morning comes to patronise the morning sun, amazing is the light of dawn delightful in its clarity, opening up to a new day The victorious sun shines bright taking pride in the strength of its rays As an oval cloud rides the wind ---- 7/14/16

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Date: 7/27/2016 6:52:00 AM
- Joseph, a great poem - Needs a lot of light in this world - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/26/2016 9:32:00 AM
A great write as always. Adding to my favs! As an aside our poem is on the front pages.
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:07:00 AM
I like lots of imagery. Well done.
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Date: 7/16/2016 7:38:00 AM
Your imagery is beautifully potent, how welcome is the morning, and how thankful we all are to see it. Well done!
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:13:00 PM
great imagery , Joseph!! I agree with Jan's words to you.
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Date: 7/14/2016 10:16:00 AM
I simply don't know where to start with this challenge Joseph you did an excellent job weaving in those words:-) hugs jan xx
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