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Prehistoric Man

There are certain times in everyone's life When we stop and sit there stunned We meet this sweetie who blows us away A totally unexpected someone You find out things you never knew Bout this person who blows your mind A quality that's so infectious and sweet It's head over heels defined You're over the moon, as high as a kite You are literally blown away In love with a creature who's so amazing They've no equal in any way Your appetite's gone, your mind is mush No idea the time of day You're incoherent while talking with people Can't decipher what I say So it all comes down to love sweet love With us for thousands of years We all revert back to a prehistoric man When that sweet sweet soul appears

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Date: 11/26/2023 5:15:00 PM
They can certainly bring a strong man to his knees and we fall for it every time, we have no defence. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2023 5:25:00 PM
Absolutely... not a chance in hell! We are doomed! Thanks Tom... cheers!
Date: 11/26/2023 6:21:00 AM
Check the closet, if he doesn't have at least 6 flannel shirts......well....beware the silky smooth
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2023 6:31:00 AM
lol beware of the silky smooth flannel shirts lol. have a great day John!
Date: 11/26/2023 5:01:00 AM
oh Jack, this is such a delicious poem about sweet, soulful love. You've described it wonderfully as only Jack can! These words are my favorite and the perfect example: Your appetite's gone, your mind is mush..No idea the time of day..You're incoherent while talking with people...Can't decipher what I say" Beautifully done, dear Jack! Have a splendid Sunday, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2023 5:56:00 AM
You're just in first grade and these little girlies are everywhere!!! It's like a bonanza! wow Love from Canada XXX

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