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The first thing I saw when I awoke In the beach were an embraced shark’s eyes Where the waves broken in pieces into the long distance Flowing underneath the sweet sand And marking in every step I made in life other than me. In every effort of my body and soul Yelling out as if it were leaving a finger, an arm, a leg As much as they begun to create a second of me; A reviewing of my separated self until I cannot yet conceive the ability of being me. How I flung myself in that shark's eyes Different from which I have witnessed in my young dream; And the appeal that reborn from my last holding heart An abyss filled with you. A caption of being Nothing else than a receiver away from me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/12/2012 1:21:00 AM
Nicely done George! Love how you've employed the vision of the shark. Nice!
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Date: 10/9/2012 9:08:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, lovely diction
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