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Predilection of Dawn

The glide of the plane almost in step with my rooftop. Visibility of blue heaven low; lookout for earthwalkers. My bland Toyota euphoric and banded by tight forest. The span of an angelic chorus, a serendipitous psalm. The predilection of dawn, a tributary hawk sails on. The silver cross shimmies and shakes reflected in mirror. I steady it with my heartbeat, my smile, my faith. 9/25/2020

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Date: 9/28/2020 11:08:00 AM
I would have probably said "imagism" for this one, but you are the author of this magnificent write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2020 1:24:00 PM
You could be right! I really had a hawk sail over my hood...what a sight. God gifts!
Date: 9/25/2020 12:32:00 PM
Strange I rarely see the dawn. It dissipates so quickly in Malta. Lovely poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 2:21:00 PM
I catch it at the right moment. Thank you, my friend! Hugs...Kim
Date: 9/25/2020 10:51:00 AM
Faith moves mountains as they say. Love this write! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 9/25/2020 7:36:00 AM
- "The predilection of dawn, a tributary hawk sails on" ... a beautiful poem that gives a wonderful image, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thank you!

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