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Predetermination

A cold moon comes up After the hot and billowing day The black beaks, black eyes White plumed necks And fanged claws masked as talons Still sizzle on the sultry brain There is no safety here It is a long trek to edge of pain The constant circle of the crow The swift alight The turbid swarming of the flight The cawings grow Not trees, barely scrubby thorns Whose shadows hide the struggle Between life and death So urgent nothing is forlorn No snuggles close to happiness One only pause to catch a breath And I walk this Namib place Towards the moon for one embrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/6/2009 7:11:00 PM
Beautiful...
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Date: 12/6/2009 5:42:00 AM
Great imagery in this one. It has a dark and dangerous feel to it reminding me of the shadow within us all. The fear that we must all come face to face with eventually. It seems the subject of this piece is moving onward despite the darkness of the shadows, searching to embrace the light. You moved me. I like it, well done friend, well done! Smiles from Lolita
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