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Predators

Found some new friends last night They gave me some things They showed me the happy life Gave me a pair of wings Wings that flew forever Never needed to rest I guess I thought it would All be for the best Never told me it was dangerous Never showed me the lie All I saw was wonderful sunsets And beautiful skies They told me it would be fun That it would be fine Now I'm trapped in a prison Of my own design How did I get here? I have forgotten the way I tried to find the door But they all asked me to stay Now I'm stuck in their dimension With no plan of release I would take it back if I could but I'm not ready for peace Can't kick the habit And I can't get away Wish I never met those predators But I guess I'd still be prey Now I'll be here forever In a tight winding dive Never take what bad people give you Because you won't survive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/6/2008 1:40:00 PM
I got the idea for my poem Sucks from you leaving that comment say that it sucks that im sick.
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Date: 11/4/2008 3:31:00 PM
your poems are soo good. i'm jelouse lol lol jk
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Date: 10/16/2008 6:19:00 PM
Hi
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:08:00 PM
I kinda think of you as a friend but if you don't want to be that's cool with me. . . I'm always on here From 4 in the morning to 2 in the morning
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:03:00 PM
NO!!! Its Day-V XD
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:59:00 PM
So.... Wait are you my new best friend??
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:55:00 PM
Look up Day-V XD and I'm the one on the phone with reddish hair
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:41:00 PM
You.......
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:39:00 PM
Do you??
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:24:00 PM
Cool. . . If you go to m y s p a c e and look up Alexz_Dude you'll see my pic. . . And I like punk/rock/rapcore/alternative music...ummm.. I popular people ( only where I live) My favorite word is dude... I've got 1 brother and 0 sisters... I REALLY dislike my mom for all the right reasons... And I have a new best friend to add for me to have now only two friends.... And do you know who my new best friend is??
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:00:00 PM
Yes I know Led Zepplin ( or how ever you spell it, I'm not so good at spelling). That's cool that you play guitar I'm getting one for my 16th b-day in 5 weeks. . .
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:56:00 PM
Thank You. . . I cut myself because well I'm 1) Depressed. 2) I was ually abused, physically abused and emotionally abused. 3) no "Boy" loves me cause I'm either too ugly or too weird. . . And I'm always scared and just need someone to here for me, you know what I mean?? I just dumped him he was 18 just like you are. . . Do you have a ??
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:51:00 PM
Oh yeah and look up the band Hollywood Undead And look up their songs undead and No.5. . . I think that you really like them. . . Tellme wat you think when you're done. . .
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:43:00 PM
Ok... So I have this "Boyfriend" and al he can talk about is getting me in the bed and doin that stuff wit him and I'm afraid to confront him cause I'm scared that he will get upset with me. . . . And I cut myself last night and my mom is angry with me to the point that she just won't let me go anywhere. . . . I need some serious help can you please help me out??
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:32:00 PM
Hey my computer doesn't do that. . . Cause it's a home schooled computer. . . I can only get poetry soup on my computer. . . Can I just tell you on here or somethin??
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Date: 10/16/2008 2:26:00 PM
I can't get on Yahoo! on this computer. . . Can you................... Call me ................ Or something?? Where do you live??
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Date: 10/16/2008 9:37:00 AM
Excellent write, just too bad you fell victim to them. But, your lesson is one that can be taught to others, so maybe through your words you can help make sure children and adults too don't fall victim. Continue sharing your thoughts and writing just like this. Michael
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