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Predator Metaphor

At a spot sufficiently shaded A predator on the prowl Lied there low and waited for prey to run afoul… Then, madly, with a dash, It shot out from the thicket; Nabbed one prey, in a *flash* And slapped it with a ticket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/15/2017 11:26:00 AM
Such a brilliant and fantastic read, well I like this one better,
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Hannah Borke
Date: 8/15/2017 11:33:00 AM
Most people can relate
Date: 8/7/2017 6:39:00 AM
Interesting poem and slant on speed traps. Well done.
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Hannah Borke
Date: 8/7/2017 7:03:00 AM
Thanks so much for appreciating this, although I thought you'd remember that I wanted your comment on my poem that included you -- which is "Pocks on Crocs". Please come back and comment on that one.
Date: 7/28/2017 5:46:00 PM
Aw yes this is a fantastic write! :) xomo Enjoyed!
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Hannah Borke
Date: 7/28/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you for liking it! I was having doubts.

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