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Prayer Bubbles

Prayers of the deep, Ascending to the surface: Calling unto God.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 12/10/2009 12:09:00 PM

The voices of the deep praying, genius work. You combine grace and genius very well. You have a gifted writing ability hands down. There is so much to learn examining your words.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/9/2009 11:31:00 PM

Never thought of aquatic life praying but I guess they do in their own way. Maybe in bubble like you described so cleverly.

Marty Owens

Date: 12/9/2009 5:43:00 PM

Love your Haiku as always...you're the best...Marty

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/6/2009 7:34:00 PM

and everything will worship him...... nice thought raul!

Sue Mason

Date: 12/6/2009 3:03:00 PM

Very clever title and haiku here, Raul ... makes me smile ... Hope you and yours have a great holiday and that 2010 is a wonderful year for you !!

Date: 12/6/2009 1:12:00 PM

Wonderful faith message for an uplifting view on life. Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2009 1:07:00 PM

Like the oceans and rocks that cry if we don't. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2009 9:49:00 AM

Luv your haiku Raul.. your title too.. exquisite choice of words... thankxxx for sharing and for your nice comments on my poetry always... your contest stirred my senses .. the photos are intense... luv today with blessings in the mix... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/5/2009 12:07:00 AM

I haven't prayed in four years, does that make me a bad person??? But, when I do they will be deep...Awesome Haiku Raul.....:JP]

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 12/4/2009 7:25:00 PM

interesting piece. i know prayer can be powerful