Prayer

Please father God hear my cry Rinse away all negativity And I can embrace positive things, Your love shines ever so bright Everyday I need your blessings Remember me oh heavenly Father on this day Contest : Prayer Sponsor : Eve Roper First Place Alexis Y. 08-17-16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/20/2016 2:35:00 PM

Hi Alexis, this is a most beautiful prayer, Congratulations on your win in the contest, belated as mine usually are, but they are heart felt. The simple prayers are the ones that God listens to. Words so simply written and yet they can touch the heart so deeply. A prayer written from the heart. This is a definite seven Alexis and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2016 11:11:00 PM

A very lovely heartfelt prayer Alexis! Congratulations! ; ) 7

Joseph May

Date: 8/18/2016 11:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win Alexis

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/18/2016 9:43:00 PM

Congrats!!! my friend on placing...great acrostic on prayer Alexis...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/18/2016 6:32:00 PM

Short and concise and to the point - I like it! Congrats! Agnes

Lu Loo

Date: 8/18/2016 3:42:00 PM

Alexis, perfectly written dear lady...God bless :)-luloo

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/18/2016 4:49:00 PM

Hi Laura, Thank you so much. I'm that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2016 2:24:00 PM

Thank you so very much for such an inspiring prayer, Alexis, a small prayer but a prayer said everyday of my life. Thank you for making me remember of everyday. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/18/2016 4:46:00 PM

You are most welcome Eve. I want to thank you for hosting a great contest. It was pleasure to participate in your contest. Thanks for my placement: -) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 8/17/2016 11:09:00 PM

A beautiful prayer Alexis....best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2016 4:00:00 PM

I love one that is succinct like this. You said all you needed to say here.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/17/2016 2:12:00 PM

This is beautiful Alexis Lovingly expressed, a pleasure to read.:-) blessings, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2016 1:42:00 PM

- A prayer that apply to us most .... to see the positive in our difficult world - A lovely prayer, Alexis - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)