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Powerful Hug

POWER HUG Oh! I am feeling down.. sad I'm missing my mom and dad Though, I am a grown-up lad (lass) Can you offer me your hug? My dear friend, my heart's been broken Built - dreams; whispered - wishes, stolen To wrong persons, I have fallen Can you offer me your hug? The weather is getting too cold Though, I'm fully clothed never gone bold Still, shivers rocking roll and roll Can you offer me your hug? My whole day has been that good Happy and loved is everyone's mood Hence, I searched and eat my favorite food Can you offer me a hug? Any emotions and situation you are in Even if you are rich or without means It is alright.. Do hug, hug is not a sin Give it free. Heartfelt, full from within. by: olive_eloi 10:40 am 02/12/2014 (revised: 04/03/2014) ------------------------------

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Date: 2/8/2016 8:34:00 AM
A real heartfelt poem Olive! Congratulations! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest Olive. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:37:00 AM
Olive, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:03:00 AM
Olive, Congratulations on your "Heartfelt poem." Take Care ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:29:00 PM
A hugs a (((( hug )))) let them flow, the way they should be, bestow, James....
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