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Power and Peace

One tiny drop, vulnerable Evaporation possible Accumulation masterful Raging wall ,mountain moving Energy eased Calm, life giving.

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/29/2015 1:59:00 PM

Excellent poem.

Hannington Mumo

Date: 10/28/2015 10:38:00 AM

I thoroughly like the powerful expression you exhibit with a subtle economy of words. Kudos! 7!

Oliver Krier

Date: 10/28/2015 10:29:00 AM

Hello! I dislike the word powerful. I like your poem anyhow? This seems harnessed. Balance of an overused word.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/28/2015 8:01:00 AM

Enjoyed this look at life's potential. Welcome to the Soup.....

Rob Bettridge

Date: 10/25/2015 8:53:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem which flowed with moving liquidity. Rob xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:22:00 AM

- Hello Kathie :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathie Shank
Date: 10/23/2015 10:26:00 PM

Thank you for your warm welcome. I am excited about sharing time with you in this community.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2015 12:06:00 AM

Hi Kathie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:17:00 PM

Kathie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kathie Shank
Date: 10/23/2015 10:35:00 PM

Thanks. I haven't really written my own poetry but taught it to children as a teacher of 33 years. I don't think a lot of people know that once they're comfortable with it children love writing poetry even the boys some of which were way more enthusiastic than the girls. Though they were the ones writing I got to help with the creative process guiding them. One of my absolute favorite teaching activities.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2015 6:22:00 PM

this is so cool. Kind of like a metaphor for a soul! Or just how we expend our energy. Welcome to Soup, I get to be your first comment!! Keep visiting others and you will see more and more.

Kathie Shank
Date: 10/23/2015 10:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. I'm glad you got to be my first comment also. I very much enjoy your poetry.