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Bleak Winter

~Tasting winter's bite as nightfall drowns this grief, my ink begins to pour.~ JCB Burl's Contest:How My First Poem Was Born 10/3/2020

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Date: 10/8/2020 5:14:00 PM
always your imagery is outstanding. Congrats on this one, Nette.
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:44:00 AM
lovely, nette ~ poignant
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Date: 10/8/2020 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, let the ink pour onto the paper for poems. Enjoy your win and day................
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Date: 10/8/2020 8:11:00 AM
a release Nette into another realm
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Date: 10/8/2020 5:49:00 AM
Wow...lovely lines....Congrats on your win Nette.
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Date: 10/8/2020 5:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 8:15:00 PM
Incredibly powerful. Nice to read you again, Nette. :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 10:48:00 AM
Lucky you lived in a warm house where ink did not freeze! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/4/2020 9:26:00 AM
An amazing one liner.. Just brilliant.
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Date: 10/4/2020 7:00:00 AM
- Lovely written, Nette :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2020 10:53:00 PM
I can almost picture you writing your first poem. ~~
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Date: 10/3/2020 7:13:00 PM
Now this conjures up so many metaphoric visuals and one big OHH
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