Potential

Little one It is so quiet right now but it won't always be I am so close right now See the stars? There are so many that You will never be able see them all Let that always overwhelm you I don't know what they will mean to you I will hold you as close as I can While I can See the stars are so far away that some Are no longer I don't know what they will mean to you You overwhelm me because I won't ever Be able to see all of you But you also overwhelmed me because I saw the world was here before you Seems impossible now I am going to hold you close In case you are a fleeting dream I know some day you will want me to let go Today I am thankful That it is so far away that I can't see it yet

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Jeff Davies

Date: 10/30/2016 12:38:00 PM

This is a very nice poem you have written. I really like the peacefulness and originality throughout. Thanks,Jeff

Some Girl
Date: 12/18/2016 4:08:00 AM

Thank you for such kind comments. I haven't written in so long and am doing it secretly on this website. I am not even sure how the website works but hearing these comments has inspired me. Thank you for the encouragement.

Stephen Pennell

Date: 10/30/2016 11:11:00 AM

your born so much to see to do, and teach him/her never to old to cuddle your mum will be fine :-) stephen

Some Girl
Date: 12/18/2016 4:10:00 AM

Thanks for such kind comments. I haven't written in so long and am doing it secretly on this website. I am not even sure how the website works but hearing these comments has inspired me. Thank you for the encouragement.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/30/2016 7:13:00 AM

Nice moments held in a nice poem ...

Some Girl
Date: 12/18/2016 4:10:00 AM