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Potbelly

Outside, Lucifur the cat curls up under the heat lamp and sleeps until you can feel hot bones through fur and skin. She's a heat- seeking missle, as much as Jennifer is forever flashing too hot. But on coldest nights wood is split, fire is lit and we three cozy up, chatting and purring around the potbellied wood stove. We daren't replace it with an air-tight, since Gramps bequeathed us his potbelly just before he died and turned stone cold. Kindle, enkindle, Ignite light on winter's night -- Add fuel to flame. Written Nov. 7,2015 by Doug Long, for scott thirtyseven's Haibun Freestyle - Poetry Contest. Copyright (c) 2015 by 2815699 Canada Inc.

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Date: 12/24/2015 3:37:00 PM
I enjoyed the descriptiveness and creativeness of this one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/20/2015 7:23:00 PM
Doug, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:41:00 PM
Nice Haibun, but unfortunately with this contest I was trying to launch a new poetic form, the Haibun FreeStyle. Close but different.
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:13:00 AM
DOUG:) NICE HM..... SKAT
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:13:00 AM
Sounds cozy, the best of luck in the contest. LINDA
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:58:00 PM
Hi Doug, I've been here almost 6 years :) I'm not old, but I feel like I'm a big part of this site. LOL. However, I'm still growing and learning. We are a bunch of friendly poets, I myself enjoy smiling, having fun. Getting to know the new poets. Thank you for approaching my latest poem. As for me, I see you enjoy writing different forms. Scott 37 is a great judge. I'm glad to see you found his contest theme worthy to write for. Wishing you the best of luck. By the way, we are friends now. :) Love SKAT
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