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...inspired by 'Old Song' by Hart Crane Your smile took issue with the sun, a flash of purest fire; it blinded me to look upon you, radiant with desire! Now you are lost to me I know, and as I sleep I pray the distant orb's less fiery glow will keep you safe alway. Your face will flicker to a haze, a fading memory; and I shall spend my waning days adrift in misery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/7/2016 4:22:00 PM
Such sad imagery Keith - the final stanza brought a lump to my throat:-( hugs Jan xx7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/7/2016 4:46:00 PM
One of my sadder pieces for sure... thanks Jan! Best wishes, Keith

Book: Shattered Sighs