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POSTCARD P ouring through an old box I foun D, O ne postcard, THE postcard, from last Novembe R. S uch an innocuous front, with its Chinese pagod A, T ricked me into thinking it was something Romanti C . C onsequently your words, laced with arsenic, poisoned my unprepared hear T, A s you confessed you didn’t love me, in ALL CAPS, for everyone to witnes S. R eading it again, before I ripped it to shreds, it was all I could do not t O D rown in memory's tra P. 6/15/11 (double acrostic and shape poem) (last line used to be "down a forbidden nightcap", then revised as above.)

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Date: 12/18/2011 12:10:00 AM
Susan, I see some congrats below my comment. So it DID win, right? which contest was it in? I can't remember how you ended it from before. But it looks great how it ends on this page!
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Date: 12/17/2011 11:40:00 AM
Thanks for the honor of reading your worthy poetry Susan, Congratulations on your win. Have a Happy Holiday and New Year. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:04:00 AM
An excellent rite Susan . Congratulations and happiness to you and yours.x
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Date: 12/16/2011 2:48:00 PM
Wow Susan. How clever is this!! I can't imagine being able to pull that off and still have great verse. Congratulations. Well done. I would have ranked it higher. I'm a fan.
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Date: 12/16/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Susan in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:59:00 AM
Wow-powerful! Congrats. to you on this fine piece!
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sue. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great Fourth. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:40:00 AM
congrats on your awesome win, susan.. enjoyed! :) huggs!
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:47:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your HM in yard sale contest with this touching write luv..enjoy honor as u celebrate 4th....
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Date: 6/16/2011 4:40:00 PM
Poetry Assignment# - Form- BALLAD *Category* music and mystery . ~ title~(( waterfalls of terror )),,,,, remember you will be graded on the rules of the poetry form...
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:42:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, it's very mature writing. Although I think it deserves a high place in the contest, I am worried because you tore it up and didn't save it and I think the contest was supposed to be about something you saved. anyway, I Hope the rule is not so strict when it involves a great poem like this one.
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:37:00 PM
A great piece of poetry, Susan
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:55:00 PM
Susan, I tried to leave you a long comment on how much this poem touched me and it just vanished. Soup is having technical problems. In any case, just want you to know I can identify with the way you felt when you heard he no longer loved you. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:26:00 PM
there is all kinds of postcards, some we keep to cherish, some we rip to shreds. this was a great piece you wrote. thank you for reading and commenting on His Prize. there is no reason why i did that. sometimes i just do stuff like that.
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Date: 6/15/2011 12:38:00 PM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Susan. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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