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Positive vibes

A long chain of each white wispy cloud, seemed so far but also so near Traveling the sky as if proud Soft enough, it could wipe a tear Drifting freely, with peace abound A simple sight with magnitude The signs of spring are all around Positive vibes reach altitude Heidi Sands 4/29/24 ABAB...8 syllables (C)opyright

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R J. Elless
Date: 4/30/2024 2:56:00 PM
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Heidi, that is catchy and positive vibes especially are all good. I like it. Stay creative.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/30/2024 3:34:00 PM
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Thank you BJ. I appreciate your comment. I am happy you like it :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/29/2024 5:59:00 PM
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wonderful rhyme scheme and fluidity to your upbeat poem. I agree...spring is so full of energy and those refreshing vibes! Nicely done...!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2024 6:09:00 PM
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Thank you Sara. I think Spring is finally here..thankfully :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2024 5:46:00 PM
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Wonderful descriptions, Heidi--splendid imagery you brought to fore through your uplifting words, my friend. Positive vibes, indeed!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2024 6:08:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice evening :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 4/29/2024 5:10:00 PM
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Lovely poem that accents the height of clouds. It is exhilarating. Maybe a little dizzying, if you're afraid of heights. It's really wonderful.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2024 6:08:00 PM
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Dizzying lol Thank you Hilda. I hope you have a nice evening :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2024 3:56:00 PM
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Hello Heidi, I enjoyed this poem. As i read this poem i could vision the clouds you have seen. i am a cloud watcher. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2024 10:08:00 AM
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Hello Heidi Yes I enjoyed this poem. Blessings m y friend /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/29/2024 4:22:00 PM
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I am happy you enjoyed this Darlene. My thoughts are with you.. blessings :)

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