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Poseidon's Paradise

Poseidon's Paradise Sunbeams glide across oceans of gold, awakening Poseidon from his slumber. His trident flashes bolts of lightning, summoning mermaids from their dreams. Tails splashing rhythmically in delight, their scales flash like colors of rainbows. Seaweeds sway in depths of splendor... blessed with water, their world is paradise. Date: 07-08-2021 Contest: Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jack Webster Placement: 2nd Place

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 10/9/2021 11:09:00 PM

This sounds like paradise! Beautiful description without adjectives!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/25/2022 4:06:00 PM

Many thanks, Jennifer. I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs. Pandita

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/11/2021 5:00:00 PM

I love the ocean and this is very uplifting, wish I was in the waves now. Enjoyed.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/25/2022 4:05:00 PM

Me too - Awww the ocean with all its ancient mysteries and beauty! Thank you M.L. Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/20/2021 10:53:00 AM

Lovely and creative write Pandita, I hope you are keeping well. Tom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/7/2021 7:05:00 PM

Awwww, dear Tom, thank you so much for your kind compliments. Hugs and best wishes. Pandita

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 2:16:00 AM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/7/2021 7:04:00 PM

Thank you - thank you Christuraj. Hugs. Pandita

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/12/2021 12:52:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/7/2021 7:04:00 PM

I really appreciate it Beata, Thanks much. Hugs and more blessings. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 7/9/2021 2:29:00 AM

Marvelously wonderful grand verse... Good luck in the contest! This is a " fav" for me! James

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/7/2021 7:02:00 PM

Thanks so much, James for passing by and leaving your kind words! Hugs. Pandita.