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Portugese Lady

Part of the masses, another blue-bottle blip ocean-sweeping ~ sailing blue-massive oscillo-roaming-wind spinning a dizzy-spherical war ~ The appetite to be sated where a new current ushers constant unpredictability on its menu: gleaming silver thrashes on its thready hang Each usual sting, brings on a singular cringe so predictable are its shivers of alas-morass entrenched within a genetic-evolutionary psyche… Luffing, she swells on the blue-flowing-feel another turn, she is riding with the armada Dining, diving, leaving divining to the wind, yet wielding its surprising, wispy, sublimity ~ (11/30/20 For 'it is what it is or is it' contest)

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Date: 12/22/2020 10:54:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/25/2020 8:46:00 PM
Gee thanks! There’s alot i cheer at Christmas but eternal life?! Heaven forbid!! Gotta lov the mass produced copy and paste proselytizing - but it can smack of disingenuousness ... melly kalikimaka ;)
Date: 12/3/2020 7:21:00 AM
LOL! You are so creative and talented... I sure enjoyed it :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/3/2020 2:22:00 PM
glad you enjoyed this one ... thank you :)
Date: 12/2/2020 2:30:00 PM
Love it. So clever. But never 'crass'. x
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/2/2020 7:40:00 PM
thanks :) well, I had one poem expelled for crassness from PS some years ago...it isn't hard to do crass (we have had 4 years of fine examples with the outgoing orange one and his inflammatory tweets etc) It's best my base nature be kept in the secret venting diary of a mad woman lol

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