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Charcoal gray clouds cover the sun Could be raindrops today Snuzzle in a warm sweater Energy a change in weather's ray A dampness laps at my notebook Surrounds my rocking chair Swirls of cool envelope the porch Draping fall's presence there Will it rain or soon pass on by We need the rain I say However the weather reveals itself Delight in season portray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/22/2013 4:43:00 PM
Well done. You didn't mention a season but I imagined fall. Fall is my favorite season.
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:07:00 AM
Amazing imagery Sara. Well penned. -Patrick Farley IV
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:36:00 AM
I LIKE HOW YOU HAVE APPROACHED THE SUBJECT OF NATURE SUCH AS RAIN, HOW WE EXPECTANTLY WAIT FOR IT TO SOOTH PARCHED HEARTS, SOIL ETC. IN A NUTSHELL, YOU'VE SHOWN THAT WATER IS LIFE! JM
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:54:00 PM
hello, Sara I like your poem very much. wonderful blessing words and imagery. .luv...linda
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Date: 10/15/2013 1:32:00 PM
enjoyed the mellow mood of your work, sara.. you are mother nature;s best friend!... lovely piece as always..:) huggs
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Date: 10/14/2013 9:18:00 PM
This write filled me with complete relaxation as the day was about ready to be portrayed! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this evening, such a tremendous write! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/14/2013 6:51:00 PM
Learning to love nature in all its aspects is a real gift! Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2013 12:59:00 PM
I sensed a very relaxing mood after this read. Your poem today was somehow mesmerizing. Great write.... genuinely enjoyed.... Thanks for your visits.... Jake
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Date: 10/14/2013 8:54:00 AM
stunning Sara you have captured this day so well love the imagery here Ty for visiting me Shadow x smile
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