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Portrait of An Addict

From tottering infantile footsteps Gangly adolescence and vibrant youth Desire to taste forbidden fruits Hobnob with society discards Ever beckoned by distant drums Weird people practising witchcraft Entranced by strange rituals Rebelling against established norms Corrupted by wild flights of fantasy Urge to attain impossible dreams Sermonizing on unknown subjects Engaged in creating hell on earth Shunning filial ties Ignorant of the anguish of loved ones Reviled by all but the ignorant And pitied by a few Unwashed, malodorous, skeletal frame Vacant eyes a fiery red Registering no events, recognizing none A pitiable mannequin in a dynamic world Ever shrouded in a haze of acrid smoke From endless cannabis trips Unhinged from his roots With no conclusion or hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 8:23:00 PM
Sumit,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Sumit Majumdar
Date: 11/21/2012 10:43:00 PM
Thank you for remembering dear
Date: 10/11/2012 10:37:00 AM
Ever beckoned by distant drums Weird people practising witchcraft Entranced by strange rituals Rebelling against established norms I really like that verse! Very expressive!
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Date: 10/10/2012 6:29:00 PM
A stark description... splendid work!!! Terry (& thanks for your kind comments on 'Boa's Ark')
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:28:00 AM
there's always light at the end of the tunnel...hope you'll make it through...best wishes.
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Sumit Majumdar
Date: 10/7/2012 11:02:00 AM
Thanks, but rebirth of an addict is rare, my friend, although I have seen some.

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