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Paint me blue like the sky rainbow's smile; thunder's cry clouded curtains rife with rain till shroud is lanced and bluebirds fly again Wistful moods in mahogany frames melancholy painters with undiscovered names rearrange reveries in pastel hues decorating lonely walls with brooding blues Paint me emerald like the sea feeling caged; rolling free stormy rage; morning calm who knows where swelling waves come from? Which shades best record a personality? Which side of the coin is preserved for history? Shall I smile or appear dignified? Do I show my true self, or try to hide? Paint me tawny like a lark as the sky dissolves to dark flying free but not for long a gloomy gloaming swallows up its song What do you see as I hold this pose? Will you reveal or conceal my imperfect nose? Will you paint scars and wrinkles or leave no trace? Will your biography in oils show lines on my face? Paint me crystalline like a wine glass for you somehow see right through the paintbrush captures the epidermis but the painter overlays the spirit Superimposing your style, passions, heartbreaks, joie de vivre onto my facets, form, features, and flaws with love, you labor on transforming my brief life into a lasting work of art Paint me gold like a sunrise as it marks the dark's demise background wash of faith, hope, love; the colors life's palette is made of. When bones are one with graveyard soils these memories preserved in oils are saved for those who later come that they may know where they've come from written 1 Sep 2022 ...with gratitude for all the inspired artists who carry forward the grand tradition of portraiture.

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Date: 8/26/2023 10:33:00 AM
I look for artist such as you. But find myself being bored to death. I could say much of this piece but I'll only say genious of the best kind. Looking at more.
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Date: 8/7/2023 4:50:00 AM
Oh yes - a fav !
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Date: 8/7/2023 4:44:00 AM
John , this gem is truly a gift ! So many poignant and sometimes humorous passages bring a smile to my face. You innately understand what lies beneath ! This is remarkable and conveys a symbiotic relationship with the artist ! I love the way you think . Your perspective is from the inside out which is deep and appreciative of the nuances of what it means to create as well as what it means to be immortalized for all to see . Belated congratulations on your win ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
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John Watt
Date: 12/8/2023 3:05:00 PM
Susan, my apologies for being so slow in responding. You were so kind to read this one at my request, but your beautiful portraiture was in the back of my mind as I wrote and submitted this, so I wanted very much for you to know the ripple effects of your artistic vision and talents. I agree with your statement that the best portraits convey a measure of the relationship between artist and sitter. Thank you for the fav and the deeply satisfying comment. Hugs ~ John
Date: 11/2/2022 7:56:00 AM
A wonderful write John, congratulations on the trophy award and topping the list of new poems…. Belle
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Date: 10/27/2022 3:28:00 PM
So beautiful, John! Each and every line is poignant, lyrical, flowing, and in a word, magnificent! I don't know which stanza to mention - all of them are elegant, and full of depth. Congratulations on the trophy - you definitely deserve this honour. This gem to my Faves! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 10/21/2022 12:06:00 PM
I enjoyed re reading this, John, like all great poetry there is something new to be found each time, and also congratulations on being at the top of the Best New Poems list!
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Date: 9/24/2022 3:36:00 PM
Fantastic poetry, John! Congrats on your trophy win! Well deserved, friend! :)
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Date: 12/8/2023 3:07:00 PM
Laura, I am belatedly getting around to responding to some very old comments... apologies! Thank you for the fave and the enduring poetry friendship. God bless ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/24/2022 3:39:00 PM
Ps- Another Fave!
Date: 9/17/2022 10:26:00 AM
Oh so gorgeous a canvas John. Your colors are vibrantly shining! Linda
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Date: 9/17/2022 8:43:00 PM
What a sweet thing to say Linda. Thank you, and I hope you are enjoying your weekend ~ John
Date: 9/15/2022 10:58:00 PM
Congratulations, John Of course, this is a Fav! You are one of the best here. No kidding. I somehow sense you know this.)) Mews..Eddie made the Sophomore Baseball team! Happy Grandmother, Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/15/2022 11:54:00 PM
Yo, John! I don’t deserve your accolades! I think of myself as one of the worst poets here.))) I will pass your comment to Eddie. Heis taking Honors Chemistry. OMG..I was so dense in inorganic chemistry.but..a whiz at Organic chemistry and also Pharmacology in Nursing School. Before I became a teacher..Pangie xx
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John Watt
Date: 9/15/2022 11:07:00 PM
A fav from you is such a delight and a gift, my friend! For you to think I am one of the best is a greater award than any contest, potd, or list can offer. So happy you liked this and pleased as punch to come by tonight and see your lovely comment. Congrats to Eddie! Swing for the fences, young man, hope you go far! Hugs ~ John
Date: 9/14/2022 5:29:00 PM
My first encounter with your work, John. Your amazing skill coupled with such sensitivity have created an unforgettable work of art. Whenever I see another portrait, your dialogue will be there, too. Elizabeth
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Date: 9/14/2022 10:56:00 PM
Elizabeth, it is a pleasure to meet you here at poetry soup. I thank you for making your way to my site and blessing me with the kindness of a read and thoughtful comment. I hope to visit you soon, my friend ~ John
Date: 9/12/2022 4:50:00 AM
John coming back to congratulate you my friend. Exceptional and magnificent!
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Date: 9/14/2022 10:55:00 PM
Thank you for all the visits and kind words this week, my friend. Your support and encouragement are felt deeply and are greatly appreciated ~ John
Date: 9/11/2022 11:17:00 PM
Wow to get painted in all the colours of nature, or the blues, this is a fab winning muse painted fabulously in words no wonder it got the mega site trophy wow! Kudos!
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Date: 9/12/2022 12:07:00 AM
Thank you S, your words are so kind ~ John
Date: 9/10/2022 9:34:00 AM
You have presented your readers with a masterpiece, superbly written and executed by a very talented gentleman, John Watt. This is such a creative write and although all your poems are exquisite, this one goes beyond. 'paint me tawny like a lark, as the sky dissolves to dark,' love these two lines! Congratulations by the score and more for this intensely deserved trophy win hugs and blessings dear friend, Jennifer
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Date: 9/12/2022 12:06:00 AM
A hug for every kind and generous word you gift me with... you have lifted my spirits so many times dear friend. Thank you always for the blessings ~ John
Date: 9/8/2022 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your well earned trophy win, John, this is simply stunning, I am hard pressed to single out one or two lines but 'decorating lonely walls with mellow blues' speaks to my sad yearning side, as well as the lark/dissolves to dark lines, just breath taking! Am all out of praise now, will just have to fave it!
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Date: 9/8/2022 11:44:00 PM
My artistry sibling, you always bring a smile with your uplifting support and naming special lines! We finally are having our first major heatwave and it's a doozy. Enjoy your Friday and weekend. Thanks for the fave!
Date: 9/6/2022 3:54:00 PM
splendid poetry from you, John. Wow, you got a win with Brian. It's very well deserved. That's all I've got to say!! This reminded me of Van Gogh.
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Date: 9/6/2022 4:28:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by with encouragement, Andrea. I know you've been really busy recently.
Date: 9/6/2022 3:26:00 AM
Beautifully penned, JW. Thanks.
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Date: 9/6/2022 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Andrew.
Date: 9/5/2022 12:22:00 PM
You have painted a masterpiece with your amazing pen. A splendid work of art in its sublimest expression. Congratulations o your TrOPHY win! A fave for me to read in years and years to come.
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Date: 9/5/2022 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! You write so beautifully of art and artists, I am honored to receive such a glowing comment, congrats, and fave. Blessings ~ John
Date: 9/4/2022 9:18:00 AM
Just amazing. I love it! So glad this won Number One position in Brian's contest. Awesome words. Poetry to sing of. God bless you. Love, Gina (oh, and congrats!)
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Date: 9/4/2022 4:29:00 PM
Gina, such a joy and blessing to know you have read and enjoyed this one. God bless you, and thank you very much for your kind words ~ John
Date: 9/4/2022 7:33:00 AM
A legacy in Art you have expressed so well John. Lovely Poetry here my friend. A pleasure to read and visualize. Have a wonderful Holiday and blessings to you and all you love... A favorite...
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/6/2022 3:07:00 AM
You are very welcome John, and thank you again for your kindness...
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John Watt
Date: 9/4/2022 4:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael. I love finding other art lovers on this site, and am so proud of your recent POTD in tribute to your father and Claude Monet, a favorite of mine. I appreciate your ongoing encouragement more than I can say. Keep inspiring, my friend ~ John
Date: 9/4/2022 2:59:00 AM
Just beautiful brush strokes from your pen John that reach far deeper into the pallet than any painting by numbers ever could. I'm standing back in awe and silence to admire this one and nodding my head as I do.
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Date: 9/4/2022 4:26:00 PM
A silent nod from Gary Radice is equivalent to a Pulitzer Prize, and as I'm still awaiting one of those (*wink, wink*) I will cherish this all the more. Thank you, dear friend, for your relentless encouragement and support. Just to know you are reading and enjoying is a great blessing to me. Cheers ~ John
Date: 9/3/2022 4:14:00 PM
A lovely self portrait for those after you to see. Colors and thoughts blended into the descriptions for others to see a fuller example of you and who you were. Thanks for sharing this eloquent poem with us, John. I enjoyed your thoughts as presented through your poetry. Have a great weekend! Bill
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John Watt
Date: 9/3/2022 4:27:00 PM
Bill, thank you for reading and leaving me with such a thoughtful and lovely comment. Hope you are enjoying your Labor Day weekend ~ John
Date: 9/1/2022 7:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem, I actually just took up painting, so far the verdict is I shouldn't have LOL
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John Watt
Date: 9/2/2022 11:00:00 AM
Arthur, as long as you are enjoying it, keep at it and you'll keep improving. Thanks for the visit ~ John
Date: 9/1/2022 1:29:00 PM
beautiful imagery in this poem, john! i love the idea of all that's hidden behind a portrait as well...
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Date: 9/2/2022 11:01:00 AM
thank you for the lovely comment, ilene... enjoy your labor day weekend!
Date: 9/1/2022 5:47:00 AM
tis said "a pictures worth a thousand words". I believe this poem challenges that adage. We are who we are....warts and all. Nicely written John.
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Date: 9/2/2022 11:03:00 AM
Exactly... many artists grapple with idealizing their subjects, but end up painting what the sitter asks (and pays) for. Thank you for the thoughtful comment, John. Enjoy your Labor Day weekend ~ John
Date: 9/1/2022 4:31:00 AM
A nicely penned poignant piece, John. It's hard to capture all sides of a person in a single portrait, that's why I chose poetry to save for those who later come. Cheers, John
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Date: 9/2/2022 11:05:00 AM
I'm with you, John. Poetry is the legacy we have chosen to leave behind. Easy choice for me, as I have zero skill at painting! Enjoy your Labor Day weekend ~ John

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