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Portals To My Youth

To me … they are memories; Portals to my youth. Each one has a story that connects me to a truth. Inanimate objects that come to life inside my mind. Still life, gathering dust that helps, my little boy, to find. To me … they are building blocks; Ingredients that have contributed in making me; Set aside long ago, but never forgotten totally. Perhaps, rusty on the outside; Scarred in a place or two; Broken and missing a few of their parts, but, hey, I’m that way, too. To me … they are one of a kind; they are wholesome and so unique. But, to the people looking at the price tags, they are simply considered an antique.

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Date: 5/17/2014 11:15:00 AM
An awesome write Joe ,,, youth becoming an antique ,, congrats on a merited win !
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Date: 5/17/2014 9:32:00 AM
Our connection to the past! Yes they are! Well said in your wonderful poem!
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:15:00 AM
HI Joe: Like how you didn't focused on antiques that are just seen on things.. :) rather you dig more into the subject.. :) 2nd and last stanzas.. :) , GBU from olive
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:41:00 PM
you did WONDERFULLY with this topic. Mine did not even place.haha. Congrats to you, my friend. Loved it.
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:35:00 PM
Well done, Joe. I like this one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:13:00 PM
nice win sir.....SKAT
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Date: 5/16/2014 3:56:00 PM
Really good. Very deserving win. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/16/2014 11:40:00 AM
Let me be the 1st to tell you that that this is good..and a great win for you. One man's treasures...as they say. BG
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