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Porn Life-2

Porn life

.          bodies  faking , minus  hearts, forbidding ,
      the drug-and- booze- induced-numbness  killing  
                              hot  porn.
          life  sawing hapless life,  insides-tearing ,
          life  sustaining,  out of limelight, ’ tear’ing.
                             brute  porn.
           rank, dank, undigested ;  the revulsion
            exploding as vomit  between sessions.
                             rot porn.
          pain for the players of its gone-stale  script            
          pleasure for the cameras , for hard-sell.
                              shot porn.
                to relish it slyly;  like a  pervert 
             his neighbor’s  son’s sudden insanity.
                              soft porn.
          crossing  the tipping points of life before
       life began, stomp-stomping down dicey lanes.
                              quit porn.

Form:  Dixdeux O  ( 3 lines,  Syllables:  10-10-2, L3 refrain), line 3 here is slightly modified refrain.
13 jun 13
For Deb's 'To be' contest.

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  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Unusual topic chosen about which to write a work..Thanks for your visit to my poems..Sara

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Congrats, Jag. I really like the way you exposed this difficult topic to light! Great write.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Congrats on your win and your taking on this serious topic. Nice seeing you on a winner list tonight, Jag.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Well done, congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:44:00 PM
    This is great in unusual form, and difficult, it is a powerful write! Good job!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:13:00 PM
    I see you revised it somewhat! congrats on your win, a hard hitting piece jaggy

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 1:01:00 PM
    It is so sad, that some life's degrade to this state of being. Congrad's on Your WIN!

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
    This entry is true to form, but subject matter may scare some people. To me, It's pure poetry.... Well done.... Jake