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**** life . bodies faking , minus hearts, forbidding , the drug-and- booze- induced-numbness killing hot ****. life sawing hapless life, insides-tearing , life sustaining, out of limelight, ’ tear’ing. brute ****. rank, dank, undigested ; the revulsion exploding as vomit between sessions. rot ****. pain for the players of its gone-stale script pleasure for the cameras , for hard-sell. shot ****. to relish it slyly; like a pervert his neighbor’s son’s sudden insanity. soft ****. crossing the tipping points of life before life began, stomp-stomping down dicey lanes. quit ****. Form: Dixdeux O ( 3 lines, Syllables: 10-10-2, L3 refrain), line 3 here is slightly modified refrain. 13 jun 13 For Deb's 'To be' contest.

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Date: 6/28/2013 12:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Unusual topic chosen about which to write a work..Thanks for your visit to my poems..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2013 8:40:00 AM
Congrats, Jag. I really like the way you exposed this difficult topic to light! Great write.
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Date: 6/21/2013 7:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win and your taking on this serious topic. Nice seeing you on a winner list tonight, Jag.
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Date: 6/21/2013 6:13:00 PM
Well done, congratulations.
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:44:00 PM
This is great in unusual form, and difficult content.....wow, it is a powerful write! Good job!!
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Date: 6/21/2013 5:13:00 PM
I see you revised it somewhat! congrats on your win, a hard hitting piece jaggy
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:01:00 PM
It is so sad, that some life's degrade to this state of being. Congrad's on Your WIN!
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Date: 6/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
This entry is true to form, but subject matter may scare some people. To me, It's pure poetry.... Well done.... Jake
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