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Porky Pine Line

.. male female porcupines preoccupied with mating, a prickly proposition the young ones will be respected and feared waddling slowly purposely tranquil quills

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2011 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robert. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2011 5:20:00 PM

Congrats Robert on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv..

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/4/2010 5:20:00 PM

What a wonderful tetractys you have penned here Robert!! Such great imagery...Cute and humorous. Love it! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always warm comments and words of encouragement. All is truly appreciated! Have a blessed evening~Mary

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 11/30/2009 2:51:00 PM

Great read.Thanks for your kind comment on my poem,Teresa

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/27/2009 4:46:00 PM

I've observed these creatures. They were indeed a delight. Oh so much beauty in nature's wildlife, and might I also say a very delightful write. Best Wishes Always Robert. Bill

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/25/2009 3:45:00 AM

Aawww ... This Is Excellent - This could also be a shape-poem (I can almost see the little bugger- waddling away - smile) ... MoonBee

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/22/2009 12:21:00 PM

Excellent Tetractys, Robert! These are very challenging. Good job! Happy Thnxgiving! Peace and love, Audrey

Brian Strand

Date: 11/21/2009 8:02:00 AM

Like the alliteration as well Robert.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2009 5:34:00 AM

Interesting animal that I would truly respect. Nicely done work. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Danny Nunn

Date: 11/21/2009 5:19:00 AM

Very good, they have to be careful, I liked this one...glad that you like Tractor Mechanic,,,have a good turkey day...Danny

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/21/2009 12:41:00 AM

Very nice, Robert. (Soupmail, soon)

John Freeman

Date: 11/20/2009 7:07:00 PM

A masterful witty Tetractys, Robert. A tricky situation to say the least, the mating.Haa! Sincerely, Moses

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/20/2009 6:47:00 PM

ALWAYS fear the porcupine! Very good and clever poem with just the right amount of aliteration....Tim

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 11/20/2009 5:18:00 PM

Nice poem