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Porcelain Spirit Dreams

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Written: February 24, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Moonbeams kindle ambrosian dreams Love evolves on auric gleams A gem in space, a costly pearl, a Luna Fetching felicitous feelings, a fervid fawn In this wassail ethereal area, hearts soar I was awestruck by the lambent moon Glittering gems, gilded in dull dust Vanity surpasses a chimeric spell A cromulent devotee, in awe Emerald aureola, blazing high star Heavenly memoir amphorae Sew love from words in utter gaze. Toed moon syntax tonight In our bucolic spot, love will thrive We are those who wield abilities of orbs Sparse straps, splitting stripes Love outshines crimson swirls Sapphire adorns translucent tulips Sturgeon Roe names cast in crystal Sipping strawberries spoils serene seas My love infused a porcelain spirit Sketch my comely soul Let me breathe your raspy hiccups Believe me—beyond oblivion Your Zinnia blooms gambol my heart Gorgeous, lost in a well-woven nimbus Fugacious felicity and fluff on fiery flowers Rising flames, faint shooting, conflict. Outside orbs offer otherworldly orbits Deciphering diaphanous riddles Could night cherubs grasp our grace? Classic clear cloud cores A balmy silk breeze hides enigmas Covered below perseid colors Your dulcet eyes sparkled dimly Rose-tuned praise of cyan candidness Via velvety vintage valleys, vivid verse vests Beleaguer back the fire of our waltz The moonlight lifts our mellifluous breath Dreams soar in tangerine skies.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/25/2024 6:31:00 AM

SP, there is an element of unknown and mystery in the description you weave. Love definitely has what seem to be unknowns to us. What starts and continues it you describe with finesse and circumspection. It takes some deciphering and time to read, but that's a joy for some of us. TY

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/25/2024 5:44:00 AM

Splendor of images--dreams indeed soar, my friend, on the wings of your creativity.--Your dulcet eyes sparkled dimly Rose-tuned praise of cyan candidness Via velvety vintage valleys, vivid verse vests--Just a glimpse of your beautiful vocabulary, Lasaad.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/25/2024 1:19:00 AM

How beautiful is this! I absolutely love a moon poem always and I think is very fitting for the mood right now too. The way your words flow in such eloquence and also how creatively youv woven them all is beyond impeccable and dreamy! “ I was awestruck by the lambent moon Glittering gems, gilded in dull dust Vanity surpasses a chimeric spell A cromulent devotee, in awe Emerald aureola, blazing high star” exquisite diction and imagery. As often im awestruck by moon too! A fave tis is for me

Bill Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 9:23:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Sotto Poet. I always like it when you sprinkle in some alliterations. You are a true wordsmith, I enjoy the help building my vocabulary, my friend. I always find a word or two I need to look up to enjoy your poems better. Thanks for sharing your immense talent with us. Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/24/2024 6:53:00 PM

Dear Sotto, What a captivating blend of fantastical imagery and heartfelt emotions. The poem's ethereal quality, with its "moonbeams" igniting dreams and "love evolving on auric gleams," creates a truly unique atmosphere. It's clear that love and connection are central themes, beautifully expressed in lines like "sew love from words in utter gaze." I particularly enjoyed the contrasting elements, it adds depth and leaves the reader wanting to explore the poem's meaning further. Such an imaginative and evocative poem. - Blessings, Daniel

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/24/2024 4:47:00 PM

Delicious language and imagery. The recording adds to the experience. Well done my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 3:46:00 PM

I felt like I was on a captivating, romantic journey filled with delightful poetic language (alliterations/images,etc.). Your poem had an almost dream-like quality to it, as if two were dancing together on air underneath the moonlight. I especially liked these words: "Fetching felicitous feelings, a fervid fawn in this wassail ethereal area, hearts soar" Your poem was magical and soulful--a delight to read. Enjoy your weekend, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 2/24/2024 3:43:00 PM

Just beautiful, and powerful diction- I enjoy your poems on love very much

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/24/2024 12:58:00 PM

Poem seems to have a waltzlike cadence. It is filled with beautiful images. I like the words "A balmy silk breeze hides enigmas".

Silent One

Date: 2/24/2024 12:08:00 PM

My brother dear sotto.. I love how your poem is a masterful exploration of love's power to enchant and inspire, set against the backdrop of a moonlit night filled with mystery and wonder. Its lush imagery, romantic themes, and poetic language combine to create a captivating journey through the realms of passion and longing, inviting readers to lose themselves in the beauty of the night sky and the magic of love's embrace.